Hey guys!
This is my first time so go easy on me
ouh and I'm doing it with dialogue
so here I go
CHAPTER 1
Eight years ago....
Jack: Ugh....I'm bored
heard a girl crying...
Jack: Wait...a girl...crying in the middle of the forest? better check it out (fly to the crying sound)
the girl: (crying)
Jack: woah (fly to her) hey, are you lost? ugh... I forgot, you can't see me (look down)
the girl: huh? (look at him)
Jack: (look at her quickly) Wait you can see me?!
the girl: (nod)
Jack: (Happy) Yes! finally someone who can see me! (jump around with happy)
the girl: (back away while feeling scared)
Jack: (look at her) ouh no ..(go to h